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 =====Personality=====
-Magu was unusually smart for a goblin, probably at least in part due to the enchanted headband she wore. She had an especially in-depth understanding of vehicles and machines.
+Magu was unusually smart for a goblin, at least in part due to the enchanted headband she wore. She had an especially in-depth understanding of vehicles and machines.
 Magu hated [[brightshore:town|Brightshore]] with a passion and was single-mindedly determined to conquer the colony. She was impatient and cruel in the way she treated her underlings.
 =====Background=====
-Little is known about where Magu came from or how she acquired the //headband of intellect// or the shield guardian she was often seen riding on (or later, in).
+Little is known about where Magu came from, how she acquired the //headband of intellect// or the shield guardian she was often seen riding on (or later, in).
 In the [[brightshore:events:battle_of_brightshore|Battle of Brightshore]], she gathered an army of goblins and bugbears and led them in an attempted invasion of Brightshore. Her army was driven back on all fronts, and she was forced to retreat.

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